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The Force

I saw you across a great distance

(Thirty or forty feet away) a long time ago

on a paved lot, enclosed by trees

And I saw you, a girl--

A space princess in metal bikini,

Riding a tricycle with lost boys

In furious BigWheel circles

(And pardon me if I'm selfish for saying)

But I imagined that I was the only one of the

Lost

Boys who saw what I saw.

 

We were safe, enclosed

By oaks, maple, rhodedendron,

In a galactic garden

Of outragous child delights

 

We embraced before you left

But never understood touch--

Never guessed at the

Seeds: cells

All asleep in our little selves

 

The day you left the old neighborhood

You turned to me and waved, smiling

And vanished beyond the trees

And became more powerful than I

Could possibly imagine.

 

Try as my mother may

No explanation could dry my skinned-knee tears

Or draw you back from the invisible force

That brought you to me

Then took you away

In the morning

 

A long time ago in a paved lot

Enclosed by trees

Far, far, and very near . . .

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tom-gunn
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Published
Jun 8, 2012
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