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May 2012
Quick lightning chases,
eyes follow the fragile leaf,
the poor frail creature.
This haiku parallels "Spring Flames." I hope you read both, but it's not really necessary to understanding the meaning. Enjoy. (I would also really appreciate any feedback you have about whether the two poems work better together or separately.)
Beth C
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