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The Minor Fall and The Major Lift

It was the third time we had hung out

as friends.

After trying to go to the new monster bar

and get Friday the 13th tattoos

there were lines at both

so we said **** it

and got some sushi.

I hadn't been out with anyone

like that

laughing

and smiling across the table

wanting to hear anything she had to say

really knowing the girl

being sweet on the gal

and wanting her bad.

When we left the small sushi bar

our insides were warm with sake

our heads swimming

as we walked to her car

and a dust storm came down on us

blowing her hair all around

and getting dirt in my pomade covered hair.

She drove us back to my trailer

and we went inside

away from the swirling brown wind.

She sat on the couch

and I sat in a chair across from her.

We talked for an hour

hour and a half

I was waiting for that good moment

that little perfect one

when I could make that move.

So we kept talking

with her legs crossed

the big tattoo on her thigh

taking all my attention.

I was never a leg man

until that night.

That classic figure of a woman

defined legs crossed like that

kicking the heel just so, like ole' Hank said.

There's a magic to it.

I was practically in a trance

staring at those legs of hers.

I just couldn't contain myself anymore

and I didn't even think about it

just went for it.

I stood up and spit my gum out

just sent it sailing across the room

before leaning down

and kissing her.

She pulled back at first

after our lips kissed one full time.

"Oh. Okay, then."

She said with a giddy smile.

After talking to her for weeks

and getting teased by my co-workers

for being in the Friend Zone

the moment had finally arrived.

The one I'd been dreaming of

laying in my trailer

as the train passed at 12:37

every night

blowing it's whistle

and I thought about how it would feel.

Her body pressed against mine

feeling her body heat

tasting her lips

feeling her body tense up

and her hand on the back of my head.

It was better than I had imagined.

She climbed on top of me

wrapping her legs around me tight

kissing each other like

we were in a movie no one else would see.

When we made it for the first time

later that night

the iPod was on shuffle

and right at the moment

when we were about to make it

'Hallelujah' the Leonard Cohen version

came on.

We both looked at each other

and smiled.

"I can't believe this song is on right now."

"Me either."

"Come here." She said, wrapping her arms around my neck

and pulling me in.

Then

from the dirt brown clouds above us

the heavens opened up

and the sky rained down

tip tapping

on the metal roof of the single-wide trailer

as we pushed on.

Away from the earth

and into the company of the angels.

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Apr 20, 2012
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