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May 2017
A door has opened and open stands
Beside the path where once a wall
Of stone had stood and no path led
But the known one stretching straight ahead.

My journey stopped I stand perplexed,
A door has opened and open stands,
Its invitation calling me
To explore a place of mystery.

I feel my breath come quickly now,
My heart is pounding in my chest,
A door has opened and open stands
And I know not what would be best.

For if it closes I would lose
This chance to wander verdant lands
Of beauty that inspires my soul…
A door has opened and open stands.
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In using the quatrain form, I was inspired by 'Where Fingers Bled' by Winn, a beautifully evocative poem.
David Champion
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David Champion  79/M/Melbourne, Australia
(79/M/Melbourne, Australia)   
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