I am a thriving survivor Though twice betrayed and abandoned Often been lied to and cheated Plutoed*, fired, hired then mistreated Struggled getting up off the couch Alienation caused self-doubt For this thriving survivor
Release all the hurt and slander To that past I will not pander Determined to walk through the door To a life with so much in store For this thriving survivor
Trying my hand at the Rondine poetic form: #12 lines in #2 verses- with #7 lines in the 1st, #5 lines in the 2nd, consisting of 8-10 syllables for each except the refrain, or repeat of, part of the 1st line. Awaiting feedback if I got the form right or not. *demoted