Stretch me out and count me like clouds Say she is vapour Venom, velvet and vermouth With hair of hazelnut rapture Clutch the moments, clutch the moonbeams Clutch the stretched out skies of cloud and mustard gas sunset Sing she is a child of trauma Supressed in the name of breathing Violence in the name of skin And she is venom, velvet and vermouth She was born to pink salt lakes in the low country With ruby pomegranate eyes And hair of hazelnut rapture Girl with the soul of a thousand pilgrim journeys Girl with the soul of a blackberry bush Girl with the soul of olive trees and sheep meat and oven bread in the fire country Human smiles And other dark things of value She lies like velvet She lies in the name of supressing traumas In the name of breathing She bleeds like a billion stars bleed vapour She is venom and vermouth With hair of hazelnut rapture She is the sum of a thousand pilgrim journeys The prayer of holy rivers in the canyon country The smoke of incense burned by sages The scars of bodies burned by crusaders in mustard gas chambers Goddess of Nuclear energies Red-eyed like ruby pomegranates Like the dewy cauldron of morning When tenuous steps lead bodies down the path of executionary revolution To boarders, frontiers, walls of white-skin scar tissue Sing songs of Babylon in the free country Clutch the moments Clutch your breaths and hold them in broken palms Clutch the tides and teach them Breach your rib-cage, unstitch and return the borrowed bones Melt the metaphoric thrones Breathe backwards in the name of unsupressing traumas In the name of truth Stretch me out and count me like clouds Girl of angel-breath ambition Soul of blackberry bush and smile of splintered terracotta tile Sing your songs Say she is vapour
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