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Jan 2017
We started off strong but now things are going south
I mean nothing's gone wrong, nothing bad's come out our mouth
But the way we interact, it kinda lost its touch
Well to be completely honest, it was never really there that much
Theres that lack of passion and soft spoken words
We'd probably show more emotion if we were talking to birds
We rushed this when we shouldve taken it slowly
Maybe we just no longer wanted to feel lonely
So we took the first chance we got and in a way we kinda blew it
Every step is important, from the first impression to the point of confession,
But instead we just rushed through it
Not really getting to know each other or what we're about,
Instead we just jumped right in without a single doubt
And now people are talking about the pasts we never mentioned
Because we linked up not long after the first impression
And now doubts are arising in both of our hearts
If this was a good idea and thats where it starts
Where it starts to fall apart and come undone
Where we both decide to not lay as one
Because we were both way in over our heads when we decided this
Lest we run the risk of making empty promises
Written by
Osvaldo Palomino  San Jose, CA
(San Jose, CA)   
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