LS: This place is desolate Where darkness ***** at your pupils And infuses your lungs with a cocktail Of cold and despair Amongst the mistletoe and bells ringing You hear a quiet echo of Isolation that has no shape Unexplained, ever mysterious Fearesome lack of a vital link To hold your feet down on the plane Familiar to countless faceless strangers And familiar faces alike Where willingly you could join In a silly dance around the circle Outlined many spiraling ages ago And feel at ease and ONE
And to the sound of choral I could fly up with crows And see it all from Unattainable High Up there in the milky clouds But Nature is so uniformally ordered and Strange as it is no law contains This spirit so eager to escape
WW: I hear the darkening silence echo And drone in the northwood stillness. The forest treetops lurching south Into the memory of sunlight Crowns bending unbroken, Grasping unspoken, To behold the waning daylight
While the spell of darkness cast deprives, It opens up the craving soul
This is the naked truth, This is the light Oozing from graying monotone Spilling from cracks between the pause, Betwixt the shapeless lines of poetry’s refrain …
For life is not a work of art, The colour a fleeting moment cannot last And the paradise of going somewhere else Still so far away
wildish
Second version of the poem, now not only my own. Thanks Wild is the wind, really enjoyed our collab! Love the way your imagery contributed to the original