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Nov 2016
Man:

That’s all right
I’m on the train
That’s all right, mate
Lee’s coming in
It’s all good
Speak to you later
It’s all good
Ta-da
Bye


Girl:

Oh my god I start at 9 not 11
I’m on the train
Hello
Hello?
Hello!
Hello?
Hello!
Hello!
Ah…ok
Hello?
No Yes
Last night?
I was like, I start at nine, so I got up at six
No one was awake
So I got up early…

Yeah, yeah I know…
Yeah but it’s stopped at Pitsea for ages
No, there’s not one
I don’t know
Yes, it going to Grays
Yeah
Yeah yeah it’s fine
Yeah
I think I’m still finishing at three
Oh no no no no no no
I finish at 1pm
Ok
All right
Bye


(PAUSE)

*Hello?
Ah ok, ok
The next station is Stanford
Ok wait so you said one at 8.18?
So even if I don’t make that, I will still make it
I have to be 10 minutes early
Yeah
Yeah
Ok
All right
Ok
Bye
23rd November 2016
Commuter Poet
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Commuter Poet  UK
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