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Jon Tobias
Poems
Mar 2012
Letting The Weight Fall Off
This isn’t so much giving up
As it is the shedding of weight
He kneels down in a bedroom that isn’t his
He sleeps on borrowed furniture
Elbows on the edge of a twin bed
He wishes there was a body there
Any body
There are some things he needs to let go
There is always going to be a girl with your heart
And your veins wrapped around her fingers
Curling up her arms
Like vines on a trellis
Let her go
He knows that being good looking is 20 percent physical
The rest is all you
Sometimes weird things make him sad
That’s cool
Anything your body does without your permission
Is natural
You’re human
Get over it
Get over
The cancerous residuals
And the fear of silence
Between two people
When all you want to do is stare
Stare if you want to
Be charming
He knows he can be charming
If he smiles right
If remembers to be honest
Be honest with me
Lonely boy
Fearful stranger to self
Little lover of the things that get left behind
Admire the broken patchwork of your poetry
You are not a naysayer
You are a yes man
Yes
Hesitant kisses
Yes
Knee buckle trembles
Yes
Loving with the lights on
With the fire burning
Say yes to the breaking
You are not being broken
You are refining your badly built artwork
Molding your eyes less somber
Do not be somber sweet child
Stand like gravity is your slave
Bow down to nothing
Unless you want to
There are some things that require kneeling
Your knees are sacred
Use them only to make things better
To show honor
To shed weight
He knows this is not giving up
As much as it is shedding enough weight
So he can stand again
Written by
Jon Tobias
San Diego
(San Diego)
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