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Nov 2016
STAND UP...RICHARD HAWTREE IS PASSING!


Richard Hawtree is
sculpting sound

out of the air
Spring appears

with each breath
he takes

making what isn't there
....there.

I fall in love
with the balance and poise

of each and every word
brought alive.

How sound glows
seduces the ear.

Here he offers me
a word not heard before

"...smoor"

the more I hear it
I want to hear it

more.

But now the poem
that had leapt into being

ends as it began
in sheer delight

the words like a fire
dampened down for the night.

Applause like waves
breaking upon a shore

the cry of seagulls
"More...more!"

Richard returns
to the dark from which

I had plucked him
****** him into the spotlight.

Richard Hawtree is passing.

I stand up.

Bow before him.
One of the best things about running a poetry night is watching something wonderful come into being.Β Β Richard leapt onto the stage and leapt into his poem about Spring and it unfolded before us in all its glorious being. The performance itself was a thing of wonder and great beauty. I fell in love with it and was even graced with a new word....SMOOR...which is Scottish for dampening down a fire...to extinguish...to suffocate.

I was just so ****** impressed as indeed was everyone else.
Donall Dempsey
Written by
Donall Dempsey  Guildford
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