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David Bremner
Poems
Oct 2016
Thoughts on a Girls Self Portrait
Your face - so young
So beautiful to me
It catches my eye
Seducing me to return
To see it - to know it
Yet I don't know 'you'
I have never met you
Perhaps I never will
Your pretty left eye - Its pretty left eye
Your dark hair - Its dark hair
How that eye holds me
With its gaze averted
Your scarf - of biege
So tenderly wrapped
I can feel its warmth
Yet I've never touched it
Your portrait - a masterpiece
Yet it is not 'you'
We must face that fact together
As exhibitionist and ******
It's not paper - it's not paint
For when I leave this room
I'll ever still see 'it'
Not paper, paint or you
It exists - you exist
I exist also
You created the portrait
But what created me?
I turn - I leave
With one last look I think
I do not know her, but she
Should be proud of what she's done.
An early poem I thought I'd lost!
Written by
David Bremner
Scotland
(Scotland)
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