I dreamed a dream of you last night. I woke, drenched, but with unopened eyes; I hadn't seen your face in a while.
I dreamed a dream that I had died and you lay with me, watched my breath go by. As my eyelids fluttered and my lips turned to stone you smiled; I know you had waited long.
I was old but you, you were young, and as beautiful as I saw you last. Your hand, soft held mine firm until I passed, and I belonged to you.
I dreamed a dream and for this I wept to think but in dreams I would see you again. Come, dear one, I am here for you, my hand outstretched, waiting.
please bestow your wisdom on me. criticism will be much enjoyed.