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Sep 2016
Spider Hatch

Charitable in her critique
my hope this morning
soap in eyes, steam
rising to buffet
the asterisk
on the ceiling
that qualifies a tepid
first impression or
dispatches me with a silken
“it’s much worse than I thought.”
Dave Hardin
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Dave Hardin  Michigan
(Michigan)   
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   Doug Potter
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