flagrant failings remain so plain
like a swelling river in torrents of rain
you did it and succeeded
as if doing it was all that was needed

how boastful now do you want to be
talk over and under in your own reverie
I smiled curiously to see the effect
She stood motionless, head *****

Listen now how candor could rule the day
Was I amazed to see the utter dismay
Cast aside your insidious grin
Feel the sharp pain... I'm standing in

Better hurry then and get out of those shoes
You don't have much more you can afford to lose
Thanks for the tip and barb too
You snagged a real wonder, that's something new!