Feb 2012
A cave crawls into me, turns inside out,
Captures my heart and saves my skin for last.
Slimy shadows spread like faith to doubt.
Is this the Jungian Shadow here to lambaste
While all the photons of the sun depart
As quickly as they come--an original sin--
And stop my thinking like Rene Descartes,
Affronting twistless logic like particle spin?
Now perceiving nothing it must exist,
Like Freud with OCD made Oedipus blind--
Becoming nothing nothing can resist.
Finally into earth my mind confined:
Create in me a ***** heart, o earth.
Perhaps a worm will have a ****** birth.
Captures my heart and saves my skin for last.
Slimy shadows spread like faith to doubt.
Is this the Jungian Shadow here to lambaste
While all the photons of the sun depart
As quickly as they come--an original sin--
And stop my thinking like Rene Descartes,
Affronting twistless logic like particle spin?
Now perceiving nothing it must exist,
Like Freud with OCD made Oedipus blind--
Becoming nothing nothing can resist.
Finally into earth my mind confined:
Create in me a ***** heart, o earth.
Perhaps a worm will have a ****** birth.
A lot of allusions here. Try to catch them all. I kept thinking Petrarchan would be better for the serious subject, but I'm so used to Shakespearean. I guess we'll see how well this goes over and work from there. Thanks for reading!
I changed the title from Death-- Blasphemies against logic. I'm a fan of one word titles, and I think this works better. When I say the word "******" at the end I draw out the V as long as I can. Just another note. I actually love reading this aloud.
I changed the title from Death-- Blasphemies against logic. I'm a fan of one word titles, and I think this works better. When I say the word "******" at the end I draw out the V as long as I can. Just another note. I actually love reading this aloud.
