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ashes

by @megan-hundley

ashes litter the chalky concrete black patches of dried skin scratched from the house your house swirling, because the creeping draft stirred the leftovers, settled in the creases by those two strokes of troubled vision. your face it spread quickly, suddenly as most wild things do lazy and uninterested, red and orange eating out of boredom, handfuls of your house what could I do but watch you be swallowed whole the investigation proved to unearth skeletons rubbed raw in piles of ashes from the fire which ate your house I held up my magnifying glass only the furrowed brows were visible they said it would be easy to level the rubble clear it out, rebuild- brand new it would still be your house just stronger with steel frames and brick walls (with windows) if the fire came to snack the ashes would not fall in your eyes like dandruff irritating right? so will you let them in? I promise once you let the steam strip away the flashbacks and allow the water to blush your skin the deflating moments of ash will not find the key to your house when I ask what's wrong and you say "nothing" for once, that can be the absolute truth for you and I  both
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25 / F / American
For You?
Written by
megan-hundley
25 / F / American
Published
Jan 24, 2012
Time
3m
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