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Star Gazer
Poems
Apr 2016
Earth- Science Project
Waiting with twitching fingers
As the judges come judging
Fear within his heart lingers
''What if they were misjudging?''
The critics were not amazed
As other kids looked at God
''Must have been how he was raised''
They said with a simple nod.
The critics' mouth forms a word
"C+ no better, no worse"
And what god had really heard
was "God you did not come first".
God added Adam and Eve
Just so the C+ was changed
And in his heart he believe
"C+ could sure be exchanged".
The critics came around again
God gestured "Look at the finest",
With a scribble of an inked pen,
C+ changed to a C-
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