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Dec 2011
As the sky does its thing and pours down upon me;
I feel it wash away the pain, with hope of light to see.
The clouds will soon break and the sun will soon shine;
With just enough time to feed my new life.
Like a seed within the ground, I lie and wait for that chance;
To put down some roots and speak of only one I romance.
Like a flower I'll rise, to breathe this new life;
When you look upon the new me, you too shall see.
The laughter you'll hear,
With whom I hold dear;
The smiles you'll see,
and how grand life can be.
All bundled up;
In the new me...
I'm really new to creative writing, my punctuation may not be accurate. I'd love to hear feedback.
Timothy J Kirkpatrick
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Timothy J Kirkpatrick  Tempe, Az
(Tempe, Az)   
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