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U had me Floored

Tiffany the things unseen you do to me

from the first time my eyes met yours

in your grampy blue van, u had me floored

hazel eyes and a spark of life behind them

to get to know you would be a ten

it seems to me like youre nervous

and a little unsure just like me

can you see?

Im writing this poem about you

cause I dont know what else to do

I was living in a tent

cause it was just me

and I cant afford rent

I thought....

just thought it would be pretty sweet

if we got to know each other

more than just on the street

Hanging out at the cliffs

that was neat

I never jumped from that height before

I was nervous

I kinda did that for you

cause like I said before

You had me floored.

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jeffrey-p-mothersill
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Published
Dec 18, 2011
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