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Arrogant judgement

by elvis-okumu

It wasn't good enough you need to improve you need to remove all this stuff and make it a new you need to please me, and make me happy what I say goes no matter how sappy I hear these words and down goes my mood I grudgingly go to work and there do I brood I wish for evil things to befall the one who told me That all the work I put in the use they couldn't see I spent my time, and put in all my effort I worked hard yet you treat it like dirt I can't stand that, the feelings I get when I hand you my work and it you reject You may not see it, feel it or ever know but against me you have given a grievous blow you have attacked me in a way you cannot see you have gone after my identity For by telling me that my work was no good is telling me the time I spent was useless and crude I went through the trouble of trying to impress and me you see as nothing but someone useless so go on and enjoy your power for soon it will go sour and as you fall into despair I will be waiting for you there
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Dec 11, 2011
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