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Feb 2016
We set out into a raging storm
On an adventure that would leave me torn

We walked a while in rain and gale
But we walked fast enough not to fail
We stopped at shops to get a few tins
As we moved quick enough to get extra mins
On to the station there after
Your shoes were soaked but still on train was laughter
We reached the city for which we were aiming
Bath Spa if you'd like it naming
Direction to hotel we had no clue
Google maps I'd like to thank you
We journeyed through the city centre
Until the old streets did we enter
Shops with furniture covered in dust
Is desolate shop in that place a must?
I remember you wanted to find £2 shoes
But you couldn't find them so to Morrison's to buy some *****
Then we carried on the hotel trek
It was long,what the heck
But we got there after a good while
I thought it'd only be about a mile
We booked in and entered room
You made coffee and *** to lighten the gloom
We ate shusi and drank some more
Then we ******,the headboard was poor
We stuffed a pillow between it and wall
After all who want the people next door to call
We did it harder and faster like we never had
And for he first time no tears which wasn't bad
We felt more in love than we had before
Had a shower with an open door
A few quick lines and we headed out
A good time to be had no doubt
There were cut outs of kanye and Kim
A dingy bar with lights real dim
We had some shots and got used to the place
Then on dancefloor a dude grabbed you waist and kissed your face
You told me a bloke grabbed your *** at the bar
I already knew this had gone too far
When they open the bottom door
My jaw was going to hit the floor
You were grinding with other guys
I could hardly believe my eyes
Then a guy kissed you on the lips
By now my heart was full of rips
In the end you wanted to leave
I agreed as I wear my heart on sleeve
We got a little way from club
You collapsed in front of pub
I carried you all the way back
I could not wait to hit the sack
You convulsed eyes rolled back in head
I prayed you'd not end up dead
I knew then someone had slipped something in you drink
For your life I had to think
I held you in the shower temperature regulated
Begging you to stay with me while I self hated
But it seemed to work
And I sat there thinking the guy who did this is a ****
I cried and cried and asked God "why?"
I couldn't bare to see you die
I stayed up watching you until you woke
When you did,no memory...no ******* joke
When you asked what occurred
No recall of anything referred
We washed again,then homeward bound
I was so upset but didn't make a sound
I spent that day without saying much
To this memory i'd rather not clutch
I should have taken better care of her
I wish I could forget it,have no memory just a blur
Creepstar
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Creepstar  Pig Town
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