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October 2, 2009

My empty heartbeat vs. hers

Close your eyes. Breathe deeply.

Lying-so-still, delicately yet deliberately

holding each other.

It's a subdued quiet, as if we are both asleep.

I wish-he thought.

I can't-she thought.

Let's just wait. Let's just lay.

Okay?

Okay.

think--

but stay surfaced.

I know-he thought

I don't know-she thought.

Maybe?

Maybe.

The smells intrigue both-

The situation intrigues both-

Is this real?-he thought.

Is this real?-she thought.

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