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Rah-Rah
Poems
Dec 2015
River Flow
All my life I was taught
Feelings come and go
As the rain and wind do show.
All my life I was taught
I must stand in line,
That it must stay as sturdy as the Rhine.
All my life I was taught
Rules are to be followed
As birds walk on a tree that has been hollowed.
But must we believe
What we have been taught
For I have for so long thought that not?
Must we believe
What they all preach
Or become new like waves on a beach?
Must we believe
That they stoop so low
Or be individual like a riverβs flow?
I now believe
That I must indeed
Find something that the world does so need.
A pretty simple poem I though up recently. I am open to any critiques that you have (ALSO GOES FOR ANY OF MY OTHER PEOMS)
#art
#water
#river
#simplicity
#critique
#conformity
#waterfall
#standards
#progression
#improvement
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Rah-Rah
21/F/Pennsylvania
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