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Sometimes in life we hit a wall Admit defeat, embrace the fall We fall from what was in our view No longer it’s in reach of you Broken promises, broken dreams Feel so helpless, ripped at the seams The wrong path we take and we choose An easier way, fail to move Onwards, forwards or upwards so Habitually we turn and go Back a step, then two, three steps more Whilst locking bolts and closing doors At the time we think that we are right Done all we could but lost the fight Which then in turn causes more pain More heartbreak, we struggle again Till one day comes - that day we feel Stronger, focused, somewhat healed The words we speak sound much the same Empty declarations again But something’s changed, yes, somethings moved Inside of you, this time we prove Those times we failed, we hit a wall Weren’t lessons lost, they were the fuel The fuel needed to make a change That day we wake we’re not the same We found the strength we thought we’d lost We followed through at any cost We kept our word, we faced the day No longer chose to live in pain Actions taken from dusk till dawn With one small win, then two, three more We notice how inside we feel That’s something’s deeper, something’s real That day did not arrive by chance Hold on to it, make sure it lasts Because that day we found the light That day we learned our wrongs from rights We moved with purpose, moved with grace That day we learned to win the race
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May 24
May 24, 2026 at 3:48 PM UTC
Action Taken, Purpose Granted
A silent and obsolete affirmation Creating a haunted isolation Visiting doubt holds the hand Troubled waters even and retreat Some solitude being granted Your fight nears it's ending Your mid stroke through a proverb Decision and ambition revive their humming energy
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Feb 22
Feb 22, 2026 at 12:21 PM UTC
Obsolete Worry
I met the girl I once was, for coffee today. Her eyes wide with wonder, yet heavy with doubt “What happened to the stories you wrote?” She asks with a tilt, her words catch my throat. “Did the tales of romance drift away? Or do they still dance in your thoughts some days?” I smile at her, then sip my mocha, The quiet mornings are now part of me. “I draw less, dream softer, but still I try, To shape a life where my passions lie.” Her frame is cloaked in a big T-shirt, Baggy jeans hiding the body she hates. I glance at myself, a dress that flatters, Learning, now, how to honor what matters. She studies me, searching for signs. “Does the quiet fill you with peace or ache?" "Do you ever find light in your mistakes?” “Both,” I reply, “I've grown to know that life is a balance of ebb and flow. But love… oh, love, it’s a lesson twice learned. Her laughter fades, replaced by thought, “You still believe in the magic you sought?” I nod, for the girl who sketched the skies, Still lives in the woman who now strives. “And the clothes?” she teases, glancing my way, I chuckle and say, “I’m learning each day. To dress like a lady, to love the view, To embrace the self that was always true.” “Will we be proud?” she asks with grace, I see in her eyes, my younger face. I take her hand, a bridge through years, through all our doubts, our love, our fears. “We are proud,” I say, soft and true, “For we became the dreams we once outgrew. The girl you were, the woman I am Not perfect, but whole, and that is enough.”
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Jan 22
Jan 22, 2026 at 7:51 AM UTC
A Coffee Date.
I met the girl I once was, for coffee today. Her eyes wide with wonder, yet heavy with doubt “What happened to the stories you wrote?” She asks with a tilt, her words catch my throat. “Did the tales of romance drift away? Or do they still dance in your thoughts some days?” I smile at her, then sip my mocha, The quiet mornings are now part of me. “I draw less, dream softer, but still I try, To shape a life where my passions lie.” Her frame is cloaked in a big T-shirt, Baggy jeans hiding the body she hates. I glance at myself, a dress that flatters, Learning, now, how to honor what matters. She studies me, searching for signs. “Does the quiet fill you with peace or ache?" "Do you ever find light in your mistakes?” “Both,” I reply, “I've grown to know that life is a balance of ebb and flow. But love… oh, love, it’s a lesson twice learned. Her laughter fades, replaced by thought, “You still believe in the magic you sought?” I nod, for the girl who sketched the skies, Still lives in the woman who now strives. “And the clothes?” she teases, glancing my way, I chuckle and say, “I’m learning each day. To dress like a lady, to love the view, To embrace the self that was always true.” “Will we be proud?” she asks with grace, I see in her eyes, my younger face. I take her hand, a bridge through years, through all our doubts, our love, our fears. “We are proud,” I say, soft and true, “For we became the dreams we once outgrew. The girl you were, the woman I am Not perfect, but whole, and that is enough.”
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I watered myself weekly Still my leaves drooped with hurt So, I purchased the latest plant food And sprayed its drops in my dirt I nourished myself regularly Still my green shoots turned gray So, I purchased the sharpest shears And clipped all the bad parts away I manicured myself doggedly And my stem remained sterile So, I purchased a colorful *** And hoped new mix would make me fertile I altered myself somberly And my plant would not sprout So, I moved myself to a different window And wished that light would outshine doubt.
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Jan 4
Jan 4, 2026 at 5:29 PM UTC
Death From Improvement
What are we left with when all our masks shatter? What does the mirror echo when our reflection seizes to exist? What does the soul hunger in the depths of an endless void? What does our root seek amidst the face of uncertainty? What does our sacral desire when meaning evaporates? What does our solar plexus requires in the loss of self? What does our heart longs for when it loses its rhythm? What does our throat scream when it is voiceless? What does our third eye still sees when we stitch it shut? What does our crown hold when we finally surrender?
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Nov 21, 2025
Nov 21, 2025 at 10:29 PM UTC
In The Stillness
Day sleep Consistently Head in the sand And underneath If I want to be better I'd need to remember To see myself clearly In every wherever I'd need To actually be me No matter how heavy Or tired I might be
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Nov 3, 2025
Nov 3, 2025 at 7:35 PM UTC
Sleepy sabotage
allow yourself to live to the fullest, change your mindset, don’t lock away your emotions. feel everything deeply, empathize fully. **** your ego and love others.
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Sep 7, 2025
Sep 7, 2025 at 9:41 AM UTC
feel.
Many a mistake, I've made But that need not necessarily be bad Because, a lot I've learned Whenever I've failed I feel I can handle anything And need to fear nothing Because, I've seen the worst Though I'm yet to see the best! Many a mistake, I've made To my struggles, you'll see no end Often, do I trip and fall In my court, never is the ball But I'm slowly improving My personality is developing Yes, I haven't tasted success But I'm certainly a work in progress!! Many a mistake, I've made But I know I'll come good Only a matter of time Please, give not a **** About my past failures See my improvements Big and small I rise after every fall!! Many a mistake, I've made But the world won't end After all, life is up and down And I'm definitely not alone We all make mistakes In fact, that's the best path to success More important than learning what to do Is learning what not to do!! Many a mistake, I've made But immensely, they've helped I am battle-hardened And will go to bed Knowing I've done enough To handle the rough Soon, will the smooth come Again, only a matter of time I repeat, many a mistake, I've made But ultimately, I've learned That's all that matters Thank you for your patience!!
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Jul 29, 2025
Jul 29, 2025 at 11:33 AM UTC
Many A Mistake, I've Made
I was surrounded by darkness. I closed my eyes, hoping for a saviour—my knight in shining armour. There you were, showering me with love and care. There I was, blinded by my own glimpse of imagination. When times were tough, I closed my eyes and ran into your arms. You held me close and wiped my tears; I felt so safe in your embrace. I didn’t want to let go, even when I knew you weren’t real. I gave you a name, added yours to mine. I gave you a family, added me to yours. I gave you a job, and associated with you. I gave you a dream, and helped you follow. I made you a hero—and me, your heroine. You were so perfect, so charming. You had all the answers to my problems. The voices around me told me to wake—but I couldn’t, wouldn’t. Because some part of me knew I’d lose you the moment I did…..
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May 13, 2025
May 13, 2025 at 3:53 AM UTC
Falling For A Fantasy
running myself ragged i won't stop until i grasp it pondering won't solve anything pigeoning at least brings me peace even when i'm tired i'll keep going don't worry anymore, jellyfish
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May 6, 2025
May 6, 2025 at 7:01 PM UTC
ripped
When water became water, not lemon and lime, I drank for the pleasure, not to pass time. When bread became bread, not pizza and cake, I'm hearing my stomach, and it needs a break. When danger becomes danger, not fear on a screen, I stopped checking corners for foes unseen. When fire becomes fire, not mirrors and smoke, my friends sit together, and nurture our hope. When food becomes famine, and future unknown, we'll treasure our friends, instead of our homes.
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Mar 23, 2025
Mar 23, 2025 at 7:34 PM UTC
When Water Became Water
Hope is for the hopeful pain is for the hurt fear is for the child inside sweat is for the work song is for the listener and voices for the listened Home is for where love resides only found inside. In the images we create, we ****** a part away from fate. In each act we are alive and in between our quiet minds will find some reason we are silent thoughts turned dark, thoughts turned violent. Prayer for the faithful soaring for the soul how can we bestow these gifts isn't that the goal? Not to ask the bird to fly, the wolf to bear its claws, but to ask the kind to fight and the killer to know remorse. To change one mind might seem so modest of a billion minds on the planet, But even to change a single mind would improve the world that we inhabit.
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Mar 17, 2025
Mar 17, 2025 at 7:44 AM UTC
Getting Changed
Who decided it was crazy, To capture yourself in a poem? I must have missed that part, When I read the rulebook you wrote. The fact is I am a defacto poet, So when I write poems that you read, Don't slander me like you could do it better. So hold your tongue, Till it's your poem you read with it.
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Jan 21, 2025
Jan 21, 2025 at 10:19 PM UTC
Illiterate Critics
So I did it again, once again I played the victim. I did it ever so slightly but her eyes are too clear; as she knows better. My Character is my greatest fault yet my greatest beauty. I am working on it, we are working on it, He is working on me, He is working through me, yet when I fall, I fall so blatantly that all can see. I lock myself in my mind. Replaying moments of: what if I did; what if I did not. NO. I am wrong. I have come to the conclusion that most times I am wrong. Growing older I must accept that I am wrong and seek to change this mindset that causes me to act out of line.
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Jan 16, 2025
Jan 16, 2025 at 1:16 PM UTC
Personal improvement.
savoring earl grey my pen rests between Masters
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Jan 10, 2025
Jan 10, 2025 at 10:16 PM UTC
haiku no. 151
Composed of fragments large and small; A patchwork heart that learns to crawl Through tangled fears, and broken dreams. Like art from tears—not what it seems. And while my seams are pulled apart, By my own, ***** little heart— With fractured thoughts and restless mind, the damage wrought, will mend in time.
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Oct 13, 2024
Oct 13, 2024 at 9:38 PM UTC
Patchwork Heart
I gaze as the Sun retreats to its hollow cavern of darkness, The stars a faint reminder of the vast emptiness that lies beyond. A dove flew across my view, And a daffodil gently landed on the windowpane. Yet, it wasn't long before I realized that the Sun had set before it even rose.
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Sep 13, 2024
Sep 13, 2024 at 4:22 AM UTC
The Sun's Last Farewell.
Euthenics is the slender reed of hope or recovery. Pretty visitors adept at taking what should be morose and converting it into something resplendent.
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May 6, 2024
May 6, 2024 at 12:54 PM UTC
Improvement #3
I built it with wisdom So that it may survive criticism I built it with caution So that it may retain perfection My love saturated in every action Every pain , impending completion, erased Due to this fatal attraction Every piece Harmoniously placed And finally I rest Seeing your immaculate function Shall I run a test? To temper your reactions
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Mar 27, 2024
Mar 27, 2024 at 5:27 AM UTC
What I built
that deadened fingernail first damaged long ago not quite a lifetime but time enough           to feel that way is showing signs of regrowth partially shrouded but visible beneath the lingering ruin the fingertip was caught ensnared and pressed more firmly than           could be endured though care was provided the bruising ran deep and undermined any chance of this body's repair unexpectedly           and unimaginable in spite of this layer of lamented keratin there stretched forth a sudden burgeoning a crescent of cuticle           and lunula telling of the strength of the fingernail to come
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Jan 2, 2024
Jan 2, 2024 at 7:20 AM UTC
cuticle and lunula
I saw a Way, forward and cloaked myself in the skin of a Digital dimension. I began living cloud-soaring and ascending soft then the headset came off. Now curtains are retreating, from the light streaming into my shrinking eyeballs. Ow! To whit, I prefer to refer to it now as a Path. Plans fail, but Paths diverge.
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Feb 13, 2021
Feb 13, 2021 at 10:53 AM UTC
On My Marvellous Plan to Improve My Immediate Situation
And yet despite the reciprocities of man, we are still at war. Not at war with other nations, Not at war with our governments, Not at war with our neighbors, But at war with ourselves. The war that never ends is the war that is fought inside ourselves. We all know that this is something that exists, We all know that this is something that shouldn’t change, We all know that sometimes war is too great for ourselves and we seek help. But the war is something that we all agree should remain. Why I ask of you, Why must this war remain? Is it so that we can constantly better ourselves through repeated questioning? Is it so we can work to create turmoil in our minds in which we must struggle through? Or is it so we have a reason to perpetually push ourselves to improve so that we may reach a certain goal? This is an answer that will forever remain for it is different for the individual. But it is my belief that thanks to these inner wars, we may improve as a society, no, more so improve as a species. Through self improvement, through self turmoil, through self questioning, we may force ourselves to change, to become the person or entity in which we wish to become, And if everyone was able to achieve this goal, Either it be through our own desires, or the desires of our circumstance, We can improve others, thanks to the experience one gains, and due to the natural human desire for social contact. But not all inner wars lead to this outcome, Many of them lead to selfishness, entitlement, or even apathy for their fellow people. Saying that we should leave behind our earthly values, or a physical addiction is not what I’m implying here. I believe that we are all allowed to have some selfishness, some amount of self entitlement, and even a small amount of apathy for people. We do not need to feel empathy for the people who have wronged us, but we shouldn’t ignore the reasoning for them doing so, we can learn from their mistakes and teach it to others. Being too selfless leads to self destruction due to giving too much of yourself away for the sake of others, this leads to a mind that will sooner than later crumble under the stress of pleasing those around them, and even sooner a body that will start to fall apart from beneath them. A small amount of self entitlement leads to knowing one's self worth, if you have no entitlement then you lead to being too selfless, and leads you to become used by those around you. How? By allowing yourself to do the tasks or the jobs that nobody else wishes to do, yes it's good that someone does those things, but letting someone do it for too long and their mind too will lower itself to the trash tasks and will become trash itself due to repeated exposure. The inner war that we all face, that we all have, and that we can all see, It should be discussed, It should be allowed to be seen by others, It should be a way for self improvement. It should always remain.
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Jul 2, 2023
Jul 2, 2023 at 4:29 PM UTC
Inner war
And yet despite the reciprocities of man, we are still at war. Not at war with other nations, Not at war with our governments, Not at war with our neighbors, But at war with ourselves. The war that never ends is the war that is fought inside ourselves. We all know that this is something that exists, We all know that this is something that shouldn’t change, We all know that sometimes war is too great for ourselves and we seek help. But the war is something that we all agree should remain. Why I ask of you, Why must this war remain? Is it so that we can constantly better ourselves through repeated questioning? Is it so we can work to create turmoil in our minds in which we must struggle through? Or is it so we have a reason to perpetually push ourselves to improve so that we may reach a certain goal? This is an answer that will forever remain for it is different for the individual. But it is my belief that thanks to these inner wars, we may improve as a society, no, more so improve as a species. Through self improvement, through self turmoil, through self questioning, we may force ourselves to change, to become the person or entity in which we wish to become, And if everyone was able to achieve this goal, Either it be through our own desires, or the desires of our circumstance, We can improve others, thanks to the experience one gains, and due to the natural human desire for social contact. But not all inner wars lead to this outcome, Many of them lead to selfishness, entitlement, or even apathy for their fellow people. Saying that we should leave behind our earthly values, or a physical addiction is not what I’m implying here. I believe that we are all allowed to have some selfishness, some amount of self entitlement, and even a small amount of apathy for people. We do not need to feel empathy for the people who have wronged us, but we shouldn’t ignore the reasoning for them doing so, we can learn from their mistakes and teach it to others. Being too selfless leads to self destruction due to giving too much of yourself away for the sake of others, this leads to a mind that will sooner than later crumble under the stress of pleasing those around them, and even sooner a body that will start to fall apart from beneath them. A small amount of self entitlement leads to knowing one's self worth, if you have no entitlement then you lead to being too selfless, and leads you to become used by those around you. How? By allowing yourself to do the tasks or the jobs that nobody else wishes to do, yes it's good that someone does those things, but letting someone do it for too long and their mind too will lower itself to the trash tasks and will become trash itself due to repeated exposure. The inner war that we all face, that we all have, and that we can all see, It should be discussed, It should be allowed to be seen by others, It should be a way for self improvement. It should always remain.
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Why are you afraid? Afraid of letting the world have your taste! Zipped! Living in a bubble. No acquaintance with the world! When did you lose the curiosity? It makes you alive Your veil of ignorance makes you think they are monsters out to get to you Look deep! Look deep! The world is you & you are the world It's a mirror reflecting back what's inside of you Bring clarity! Bring clarity! And tear away that veil Look within, then look away You may find yourself in a different being!
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Jun 26, 2022
Jun 26, 2022 at 10:04 AM UTC
Mirror