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FROM THE HILLS 1971

Monks lined up

in the evening cloister,

 

awaiting the bell for Vespers,

I stood in line,

 

eyeing the monk in front,

his cowl of black,

 

hands hidden from sight,

to be a saint

 

is to be what God

wants us to be

 

Therese said,

the stars in the square of sky

 

visible from the cloister,

orange bricks, dark, cold,

 

of walls and cloister wall,

she opened wide

 

as if a flower

at morning light,

 

the bell tolled

and the monks moved

 

on and in,

two fingers in

 

the stoup of water,

sign of the cross,

 

enter she said

come to me,

 

and I stood in the front stall

of the choir on the left,

 

smell of incense

still there from Mass,

 

the huge black book,

Latin words, plainsong music,

 

He has satisfied

the hungry with things

 

that are good

Dom Henry said,

 

I turned page after page,

Hugh beside me toned

 

his voice like a girl,

the abbot the figure

 

of Christ amongst us,

vírginis matris cláusula,

 

we sat and sang,

I listened as I sang

 

voices about me,

miséricors Dóminus

 

et iustus,

and she was warm

 

and ****** and ******

I watched the monk opposite,

 

head to one side,

eyes on the page,

 

tonsured and thin shouldered,

salty she tasted

 

salt of sea and fish,

without us God

 

will not Augustine said,

Dom Frederick whose book I read

 

spoke to me of

my lawn mowing skills,

 

from where shall

my help come?

 

from God,

from the far hills.

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Written by
TerryCollett
78 / M
Published
Dec 11, 2015
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A YOUNG MAN IN AN ABBEY IN 1971 HAUNTED BY A WOMAN

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