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#1971
She ran the razor blade along the side of her wrist, slowly, determinedly, tongue in the corner of her mouth, focused, no one else was in the adjoining toilet cubicles on the locked ward. Blood came and she became relaxed, and held the razor blade away from the skin. It was sticky with blood. She sat there gazing disinterestedly at the scene. All else, all other things, and voices, and far away music from the ward radio, were like echoes in a dream, and she didn't talk or laugh or scream.
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Jun 27, 2025
Jun 27, 2025 at 3:43 AM UTC
Lily One Friday Afternoon 1971.
Come over and have a coffee and such she said and I was caught by the such and it intrigue me. So after my morning shift I went to her apartment. She opened the door after locking her mutt in another room. She smiled. Didn't think you’d come she said. She let me in and closed the door behind her. Don’t mind the mutt she said he’s always unsocial. She took me into her lounge. Sit down she said and I’ll get those coffees. I sat on the sofa and looked around the room there was a few paintings on the walls and couple of photographs on a shelf of her and her husband who I met with her in a local bar. Want some music? she said. Sure what you got? I asked. Beatles? she said. Sure I said. She put on a Beatles’ record on her Hi-fi and she sat on the sofa beside me. So how are we doing? she said. Ok I said it's been a busy morning at the Lodge I guess it is she said. We sipped our coffees after a while with small talk she said. Do you fancy me? I wasn’t sure how to answer I guess so I replied. My husband is away on a long haul and won't be back until late tonight. I sipped the coffee. You aren’t shy are you? She said. I was going to reply when I woke up. I guessed I said yes or maybe no I’ll never know.
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Jun 6, 2025
Jun 6, 2025 at 4:00 AM UTC
Coffee And Such 1971.
You were afraid of the dark, Afraid of what it might bring What bogey man may appear From the shadows, or perhaps A spider creep across your bed And enter your long hair or Enter your over tired head. Black Dog came upon you In later years, brought a new Deeper darkness, a quick sand Type of darkness and drag you down to a kind of terrible hell. Cheer up, your mother said, Cheer up my child, my sweet girl.
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Feb 26, 2025
Feb 26, 2025 at 8:34 AM UTC
Cynara and Black Dog 1971.
The morning was bright and the sun came out despite the snow still covering the grounds and fields outside the locked ward. I stood by the lounge window and peered out at it. I could see the traffic going past on the road beyond the fields. I was given a cigarette by Eastman the nurse on duty, a thin **** of a man with that look of a monk about him. Bridget got into a row with the Asian nurse about her medication and whether she had taken it or hidden it. I stuffed it up my bahookie, Bridget said, want tae hae a keek? The nurse walked off and Bridget smiled and lit herself a cigarette. After our crap dinner I had an appointment to see the quack. It was the foreign one, our usual was sunning himself some place so i assumed. The quack asked the usual questions and I sat there gazing at his black hair and brown eyes like **** holes, replying now and then, watching Vincent standing by the window moving his finger along the glass, drawing invisible marks. The nurse who sat beside me urged me to reply to the question. How are you feeling now on the new medication? he asked again. Vincent turned and made faces at the quack that made me smile. No different, I said, trying to contain the smile that watching Vincent brought on. The quack looked towards the widow, but couldn’t see Van Gogh standing there. The afternoon dragged like a man pulling a dead elephant through mud. Teatime we had cheese and ham sandwiches and that mud-like cocoa. Lucy sat beside me on the battered brown sofa in the lounge, gazing the the TV, and some boring programme about politics. Bridget said loudly that politicians were a crowd of ******
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Feb 28, 2025
Feb 28, 2025 at 4:07 AM UTC
Cynara's Note # 30 1971.
The morning was bright and the sun came out despite the snow still covering the grounds and fields outside the locked ward. I stood by the lounge window and peered out at it. I could see the traffic going past on the road beyond the fields. I was given a cigarette by Eastman the nurse on duty, a thin **** of a man with that look of a monk about him. Bridget got into a row with the Asian nurse about her medication and whether she had taken it or hidden it. I stuffed it up my bahookie, Bridget said, want tae hae a keek? The nurse walked off and Bridget smiled and lit herself a cigarette. After our crap dinner I had an appointment to see the quack. It was the foreign one, our usual was sunning himself some place so i assumed. The quack asked the usual questions and I sat there gazing at his black hair and brown eyes like **** holes, replying now and then, watching Vincent standing by the window moving his finger along the glass, drawing invisible marks. The nurse who sat beside me urged me to reply to the question. How are you feeling now on the new medication? he asked again. Vincent turned and made faces at the quack that made me smile. No different, I said, trying to contain the smile that watching Vincent brought on. The quack looked towards the widow, but couldn’t see Van Gogh standing there. The afternoon dragged like a man pulling a dead elephant through mud. Teatime we had cheese and ham sandwiches and that mud-like cocoa. Lucy sat beside me on the battered brown sofa in the lounge, gazing the the TV, and some boring programme about politics. Bridget said loudly that politicians were a crowd of ******
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I awoke and I was there someplace in some bed being attended to by some male nurse who had brought breakfast on a tray it had been a drugged sleep and I recalled vague images of the night before some sort of descent to a darker hell and police officers came and a struggle and an ambulance and medication and off to some hospital to be soothed to a deep sleep Where am I? I asked the nurse he said the name of the place some psychiatric hospital and left the room later I wandered the ward and adjoining corridor and spoke to none and none spoke to me except some quack with letters after his name later I tried to top myself not wanting to play the game but others came and cut me down and transferred me to the locked ward behind double doors with other broken minds and green linoleum on cold floors.
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Oct 6, 2019
Oct 6, 2019 at 3:12 AM UTC
Mind Games 1971.
His head no longer tonsured but cropped close like a zec in a Stalinist prison, he passed me in the cloister in his loose fitting robes, head down, deep in thought or prayer. Another monk who walked with a limp, weeded the beds by the cloister wall, a black patch over one eye like a pirate from Treasure Island which I read as a boy. I swept the refectory in the mid morning work, watching the sunlight make patterns on the wooden floor, colours from the coloured-glass windows. The tall lean monk planed the wood smooth for the cross, to mark the place of the monk who died in the week, peaceful in his bed. Who of these is holy, I wouldn't know, none looks into their inner self or soul and pleads as such to themselves or others if they dare; holiness or saint-hood is for God to declare.
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Aug 17, 2019
Aug 17, 2019 at 8:39 AM UTC
His Head no Longer Tonsured 1971.
Confiteor Deo omnipotenti. The old monk black robed moved side to side down the cloister a wrecked ship in the high seas of his age as the bell tolled for Lauds. Et vobis fratres and come she said bring me your soft spoils bring me to my highest heaven so I did. Without free will there can be no sin or virtue without free will you are free of all responsibilities Dom Thomas said to us. Quia peccavi nimis the young monk confessed. Belltower seen above trees from the roadside and heard further afield than that. George and I pulling the bells as we shown the day before. Cogitatione verbo et opere et omissione I said in my inner darkness. Dom Charles twisted the apple just so and said that is how it is done.Mea culpa mea culpa mea maxima culpa having free will is to be culpable from the beginning and having free will is necessary factor for any sinning.
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Sep 3, 2018
Sep 3, 2018 at 8:40 AM UTC
Confiteor 1971
The bell rang for Matins. The tall thin monk seemed to glide past me to the church. The cloister had captured and held the cold morning. I gazed into the cloister garth on my right and saw the flower beds spread like a carpet. I entered the church and dipped my finger in the stoup and made a sign of the cross and took my place in the choir stalls. Opposite monks had gathered in the 5.30am dawn and stood or sat turning pages of their books of prayer. Beside and behind other monks gathered about me likewise ********* books for Matins. The abbot knocked on wood and the chanting began. The morning sun shone through high windows and laid a splash of light on the flagstone floor. I followed and chanted the Latin words to mix and blend with the others. I watched the sunlight flicker on the floor. I smelt the incense from Mass the day before and each day would come and go and be the same like an echo down the wind. I wondered would I stand with saints or those who sinned.
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Sep 3, 2018
Sep 3, 2018 at 3:54 AM UTC
Matins and Thoughts 1971
From the window I see snow falling and that old friend darkness calling. Darkness embracing with its chilling arms and cold breath on my neck and in my dreams. The snow drifts heavy and clings to branches of the tall trees and white caps like old maids or dying giants aged. I stare and stare as the whiteness drifts and falls and beyond the trees the darkness ever the darkness beckoning to lie like old soldiers in Russian winter just to lie and die blanketed by snow. I smoke and watch the silent drift splitting the darkness with a sprinkle of white to brighten the night. Some days I want to drift white and pale drawn by darkness into that abyss and sense on my lips and brow that cold cold kiss.
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Aug 25, 2018
Aug 25, 2018 at 12:01 PM UTC
From the Window 1971
The taxi dropped me off at the end of the drive. I wanted to walk up the avenue of trees to the monastery and leave the outer world by a slow walk. It was September and the August warmth remained and birds flew overhead. Half way up the drive, I saw three black robed monks walking towards me. I knew them all from my previous visits. This time it was to stay and take my place amidst them all. Words of welcome and enquiries of my health and state of mind and humour to relax me as we entered the porter's lodge of the abbey. A sense of nervousness entered me. The world and its works left behind and the inner world of this desert would shape me and prepare me. After the introduction and cheer, a brother took me to my room or cell as it was called and watched and talked as I unpacked my things. He studied the books I unpacked: Story of a Soul, Confessions of St Augustine, one Bible and poems of Hopkins. He left me and said he would return later for me for the Office of None; two others came so I wasn't alone.
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Aug 24, 2018
Aug 24, 2018 at 8:09 AM UTC
First Day at the Abbey 1971
The monk stands in the shadow of the cloisters, said Benedict, his arms folded beneath his black habit, his features unsmiling, his stare out at the garth and the clock tower over the way. I watch him, feeling the sun's warmth where the shadows aren't; the flowers in the flower beds are in full bloom, the afternoon air throws birds into the sky to set free and fly. Other monks gather in the garth after the office of None; Patrick wheels out the trolley with tea, coffee and cake; we stand and talk in the brief recreational break; white clouds drift by, birds take wing above in the afternoon sky. One talks to me of his book on the abbey, the history from its origins in France until exiled here. There is the bell for the end of the break and on we go to our occupations in our rooms or church; I attend the Latin class with George and Gareth, our novice master aids us in our studies, we learn the holy sounds of the Latin phrase and chants. I love the office of Compline: the chanting in the half-dark, the evening light through high windows, the utter separation from the outer world and our communion with God in prayer and chant and song, and our hymn to Sancta Maria, and the final bell, and the prayers on wing and air, and I stand momentarily silent there.
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Jul 30, 2018
Jul 30, 2018 at 6:13 AM UTC
Benedict and the Monks 1971
Looking out beyond dark the night sky reflects you beside me in the glass of the large windowpane. Others selves beyond us you and I the bright light of the lounge in this house and locked ward for the mad or so seemed. Radio playing Jazz smooth light stuff. We light up cigarettes staring out at darkness and pale moon. You depressed feeling low out there death stares at us you utter beyond this another world turns and turns and turns behind us the other kind of mad just like us. I listen to that sad poetry recalling us last night in that side room off the ward on that bed. Behind us a nurse passes in a rush and others pass in a crowd and a light buzzing bright blares out loud.
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May 29, 2018
May 29, 2018 at 3:50 PM UTC
Beyond Dark 1971
You slid a finger down the inside of your left arm in imitation of a knife blade. Nurses passed by back and forth busy making beds in the locked ward. I sat on the sofa looking at you standing there. Your slim finger left a feint line of pinkness. The Scottish woman stood by the doorway smoking and moaning about the Indian woman who she said stunk tha place ta hell. Music from the radio pushed out pop or DJ crap. You walked past the Scottish moaner into the other part of the ward. I watched you walk away how the short dressing gown held you close. You beckoned me to follow with a curved finger. I stood up and walked past the Scottish woman. Cannae ya smell tha stinking betch? She said. I said no although I had but not wanting to say. She moaned on but I walked away.
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May 21, 2018
May 21, 2018 at 8:26 AM UTC
Locked Ward Morning 1971
They left you sitting in the large room. You remember sunlight entering in and the echo of voices down the hall. They had sat you in the chair and left you there. They had performed performances on you using electric shock as you lay tied to a bed and attached things to your head. You wondered where the far door led and where the door behind led off to and why they left you. You passed through a ward with a nurse either side and the patients gazed at you as you walked past and they became silent as you passed as if someone had turned off the sound. They have left you with your thoughts and feelings and doubts and dark and just the echo of the electric spark.
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May 13, 2018
May 13, 2018 at 3:19 AM UTC
Left You 1971
Yiska ran her finger down the windowpane. Outside snow drifted in large flakes. She lit a cigarette and blew smoke at the pane. I moved beside her and watched the falling snow. "I want to be out there not stuck in here in this madhouse" she said. She took my hand in hers and squeezed it. "You are the only element of sanity in this hole" she added. "We are both stuck here with other broken minds" I said. She squeezed my hand tighter. A plump nurse walked past behind us like a young hippo. I saw her reflection in the windowpane. "Remember that night in the ECT room ?" she said. "Yes and the night nurse found you while I hid under the recovery bed." She smiled. The hippo nurse came up to us and said "Have you had your medication yet Yiska?" Yiska turned to face the nurse. "Yes the skinny nurse gave it to me" Yiska said. The nurse walked away up the locked ward. "Did she?" I said. "She did but I threw them down the toilet" she said and released my hand. I lit a cigarette and stared out at the snow and our promised land.
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May 10, 2018
May 10, 2018 at 5:25 PM UTC
Promised Land 1971.
The Scottish woman moaned about the medication being late and the Asian woman rocked back and forth on the armchair with a bone looking grip looped in her hair. You were standing with me by the large window gazing out at the trees and fields covered in snow. You touched my hand with yours and I sensed the roughness of the bandage around your wrist where you had cut it and few days before and the tubby nurse found you sitting on the floor watching the blood flow out and the nurse screamed at you something she wasn't meant to do. "Wish I was out there" you said "lying there like some lone soldier deep in snow waiting for death and what a way to go."
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Apr 21, 2018
Apr 21, 2018 at 3:32 PM UTC
Yiska and Snow 1971
She stood by the window looking out at the snow it was falling in slow large flakes. He was on the sofa smoking studying her figure. A nurse rushed past arms holding towels. The radio was on playing a Beatles' song. Her wrist stung where the stitches pulled against skin. The Scottish woman was moaning about the weather. Another nurse walked past eyeing him sitting there smoking with his intense stare. The Indian woman walked to a fro across the ward muttering either curse or prayer. He walked over to the window where she stood watching the snow falling slow Their hands touched. Skin on skin. Her bandaged wrist touched his bandaged wrist. They studied the snow but didn't kiss.
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Apr 6, 2018
Apr 6, 2018 at 3:32 PM UTC
Watching Snow 1971
Her last breakfast at home before entering the convent. Her mother fussed over breakfast making sure everything was just right. Her father was driving her to the train station. She hated emotional goodbyes. She knew that her mother would cry. Then she would cry. She sat and ate the breakfast her mother had prepared. Like a condemned person's last meal before execution. The radio was on playing Elgar. No more radio in the convent nor TV. Two others girls wound be arriving today besides her. She was nervous. It was the end of an era. Up at 5am each morning for the office of Matins. No breakfast until 6.15am She sipped her tea. She drank it slowly. Her mother busied herself trying not to think of her daughter's departure. Her father ate breakfast in silence reading the newspaper. End of an era. Beginning of a new. Her father's hair was greying and his suit was blue.
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Apr 4, 2018
Apr 4, 2018 at 2:08 AM UTC
Last Breakfast At Home 1971
The kid arrives(day patient) and walks the ward like an intense panther. I sit on the sofa waiting for nothing, and nothing happens, nothing that interests me to stir or contend to anything or end. Yiska comes from the small medical room; her wrist fresh bandaged. The kid straight away pesters her, surrounds her, sticks out his tongue. I get up and push him away; he comes back at me and Yiska screams. Nurses come out of the walls, separate us. He is all large eyed, mouthing foul language; I want to bust him one, but a big male nurse stands between us. The kid walks off. I watch him go. The nurse watches us. I sit next to Yiska. She looks at her wrist bandaged. She'd slit her wrist the day before. We light up our cigarettes and smoke. The kid walks about staring at me with his dark eyes. I gaze at him cool, releasing smoke.
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Mar 17, 2018
Mar 17, 2018 at 6:22 AM UTC
Locked Ward Conflict 1971
He tried to hang himself in the toilets on the locked ward. She heard and saw the nurses rushing to a fro like headless chickens. She sat on the sofa smoking. She'd spoken to him that morning before breakfast. They had watched the snow falling. The quacks won't be pleased. He'll be watched more carefully after that. She'd not tried that: hanging wasn't her thing. Slit wrists or overdose was more in her line. The Indian woman sat over the way rocking back and forth. All sorts. Nurses passed by; the plump nurse like a young hippo rushed past. She'd talk to him once he was about again. The snow had stopped. Now she supposed would come the rain.
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Mar 4, 2018
Mar 4, 2018 at 4:47 PM UTC
Come the Rain 1971
Yiska slides the razor blade along her wrist a line of red erupts spills drips into the sink she stares at the wrist bloodied she takes the razor blade with her free hand and wraps it in tissue and drops in the lavatory bowl and presses the flush and water rushes the tissue away the ****** hand and wrist become objectified she studies how red the palm and wrist and sink she lifts her hand and walks out into the ward leaving a red trail a scream and a nurse runs to her and takes her to the medical room Yiska what have you done? The nurse washes the wrist under a tap the blood runs diluted into the sink she holds the wrist gently until clean Yiska watches unpreterbured detached gazing on other fingers dab and bandage Yiska senses an inner rage.
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Feb 18, 2018
Feb 18, 2018 at 12:41 PM UTC
Razor and Rages 1971
Yiska stood by the window of the locked ward. Snow drifted slowly in large clumps settling on the window sill and the trees and on the lawn below. I should be out there. Not stuck in here. Her bandaged wrist smarted where she'd slit it days before. Should have done it better. Try again if I can. In a nearby field a tractor ploughed slowly. Gulls and rooks followed behind like small ghosts. Where's Benedict? The other patients roamed the ward. Nurses passed purposely. Hands went around her waist. Benedict kissed her neck. Warm kiss. Snow? He whispered. The gulls and rooks lifted up and away. Beginning of a new dull day.
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Sep 17, 2017
Sep 17, 2017 at 3:19 PM UTC
Snow Drifted 1971
The nurses half walked half dragged the screaming woman along the passageway of the locked ward. He watched them, a cacophony of screams and shouts and banging of doors,  then silence; that was more disturbing that silence, and picturing the patient on the bed strapped down, the rubber mouth piece between teeth, the injection to oblivion,  the electrodes applied each side of the skull, the electric shock applied, the body in motion as the current rides. He knows the score he's been there before, knows the strapping down, the rubber piece between teeth, the injection and the buzz along the nerves, ******* consciousness out of each pore and momentarily it seems you are no more.
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Sep 5, 2017
Sep 5, 2017 at 3:44 PM UTC
Ect Application 1971
Nurses rushed past, flashes of white and blue, Benny watched them go; someone must have slit a wrist or saved up their pills and ODed, he didn't know, just one from the women's dormitory who'd had enough and wanted out. One tried to hang herself in the lavatory from the water pipe with a nylon, but they got her down in time(much to her annoyance afterwards. Benny tried on his first day in the lavatory outside the locked ward, but someone saw him and grabbed him down before he could succeed; ******* soft heart,   Benny yelled at the time. A flurry of voices from the passageway. Maybe it's Yiska again. Have to get a free ride out of this place somehow she had said the day before. Benny pulled on his cigarette; inhale he mused, and forget.
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Aug 31, 2017
Aug 31, 2017 at 3:54 AM UTC
To Forget 1971.
Pax in te the young monk said during Mass his hands touched mine sign of peace, trees swayed in the early morning breeze by the South wall, Il vento è il respiro di Dio the Italian monk said as we stood gazing at the trees, I cleaned the toilets after Terce bucket and mop and cloths the smell of disinfectant in the air, Dieu est amour Dom Charles said l'amour de Dieu est aussi dans sa création we had arranged flowers by the statue de la mère de Dieu, in some cases silence is dangerous St Ambrose said Gareth related as we sat on the private beach of the abbey, the bells tolled for Vespers George and I pulled as we were shown le campane sono la voce di Dio, incense in the church after Mass the sound of plainsong still in the air in echoes, der Glaube an Gott ist ein Akt des Willens the Austrian monk said I looked at him but was stumped by what he said, faith in God is an act of will Gareth said translating as he thought best, peace within no act of will just peace and rest.
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Jul 10, 2017
Jul 10, 2017 at 2:18 PM UTC
PAX IN TE MCMLXXI