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Dec 2015
pop it in me
like a drug
we breathe
faster and faster
'til it's deafening
the feeling inside me
pure energy
our bodies
overflowing
into rivers
as we shiver
our tears form icy jewels
from warm to cool
we're both each other's fools
who wrote the rules
?
i know this doesn't seem like a very good write, but i'm proud of it because each line can be said with the line before or after it and it was actually inspired by a real moment
Brooklynn Nights
Written by
Brooklynn Nights  Colorado
(Colorado)   
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