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Broken Promise

A man, passing a certain point

on a certain sidewalk,

looks back,

reflects upon his being

and is beset by memories.

 

The sweet fragrance of her perfume;

Her hair, like silken scarves.

The touch of her body with skin so soft.

All taken away but a lifetime too soon.

 

And a promise to never love again…

 

He tries to forget what he has remembered

but the floodgates open wide,

pouring out into a paramount vision

of his life without living.

 

He sees her in the clouds

(They form her silhouette)

He hears her voice in the night

(The wind carries her song)

He feels her in his very soul

(Yearning to break free)

 

Tears flow, his vision is obscured by hazy clouds.

He sees her in the gloom ahead.

Is it her?  He can’t tell.

She turns around, face full in front

of his tear blurred sight.

 

No, it isn’t her

but she is there.

 

It happened so fast, he doesn’t believe.

He wouldn’t let go he steadfast truth

that love cannot live

after pain, suffering and grief

have left signs of passing.

 

But not now.

 

Inside his heart a feeling begins to break

the chains of self-pity

imprisoning him for so long.

They are wrenched apart,

torn,

broken,

and bleeding.

 

The promise breaks free from it’s cold,

dark prison and flies away,

blown on the breeze to fall

unnoticed to the street.

 

And this man takes her hand in his.

He had found his love again; he would never let it go.

“Do you love?” she whispered,

and whirling around, whisked him into

the still, cold night;

laughing, then falling silent.

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Written by
travis-barefoot
American
Published
Nov 10, 2011
Lines·Words
50·272
Notes

College creative writing class spawned mediocrity. I considered this one the best of the mediocre.

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