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Comet

by not-nick

You want to know what I love about you? I love your beaming smile And the way it makes Your hazel eyes squint And the way you kiss me like I just got off a battleship I love your soft cheeks And pouty lips I love your messy hair in my face When your delicate head Lays upon my chest And the feeling of your soft skin Pressed against mine Your naive laughter Bounces moonbeams through my chest And makes your dark eyes shine I love the way your body fits So perfectly in my arms Right next to mine Like we were molded together Long ago Two lost pieces That aligned in time Like when Orion meets Artemis in the winter sky Far away from tear filled nights Gasping last words Into a phone speaker As she says it didn't mean a thing Like a pretty old box Holding an abonded engagement ring Last chance Car crash and last breath But every moment leading to the next And you fall into my life like a comet You ask what I love about you? I'll tell you someday To tell you now Is like printing the words of Shakespeare On soft cover page
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Written by
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Published
Oct 20, 2015
Time
2m
Notes

When you fall too fast

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#love#feelings#poetry#stars#falling#confusion#loneliness#shakespeare#comet#depravity
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