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Atman Asthma

You

sad angel sitting

again

to remind me of that

day on which you were born

Saturn raised its heavy head.

 

Any sighted comet would have

been more hopeful

than that menacing globe

 

Remember the gelignite in your lungs

and cotton bronchioles?

Remember emptiness without melancholy?

Your chin on your palm, your power

lost, lost

in the number thirty

 

If this is the last orbit

the last revolution

the last whirl of your life’s wheel

hear how my song will ignite your pranas

until the

final wick of your trapped soul

cinders

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Written by
andres-hernandez
American
Published
Oct 14, 2011
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