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untitled #3 (re: september nights)

nightsong/fallsong

nippy nightfog, dark drive (solo)

breathy windshield, elmvale driveway defog,

a naked girl/thru the house panes

whose bareness

is shown teasingly. (full aware)

 

homestead.

lamplight, "goodnight!", golden readlight.

bowl of noodles -- broccoli,

darkly pacing silent upstairs/eight-track recorder loudsound (genesis/trick of the tail)

weedpipe outside cold fresh nighttime.

outdoor pissing/rockwall/hosetap,

posters/scotchtape/pins

(troilus & cressida pages taped to th'wall)

alone with thinkcap, lady dreamin'

(that ass!---ahh!) (sighs)

ragged joint thru windowscreen . . . baked-up mouth pasted---ice tea sippin' (glorious)

warm blankets & an empty bed;

need to get out of this ****** old town

empty; lonesome songs.

---but, think better . . .

this pre-spain hometown transatlantic waitin' sadness won't last

forever.

& tripping gets you nowhere. (snoop dogg)

smoke again and maybe put on

more genesis.

. . .

*(tho it is fleetwood mac instead

that i slap on/toss myself into bed.)*

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alloyddavies
32 / M / Canadian
Published
Oct 20, 2011
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