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Aug 2015
When He told her He loved her
He told her not Her
And she brought it up
Where She could see
Heart already torn
What could She do?
But hope it a trick
A joke
As best friends like they often do
But as she smiled and She smiled
Tears in Her eyes
Her boyfriend - the culprit- saw none
Of the pain She locked inside.
Just to help those who may be confused;
The girl who is referred to by capitaled name (She, Her) is the girlfriend of the boy, and the girl referred to by non-capitaled names (she, her) is the one who the boy told he loved.
I know it's not very good and it's messy and unclear, but if you've read this far (as most won't) you might as well know it was made this way to keep its meaning as hidden as possible unless you look beyond what you see; just as the girlfriend hides her pain at how close the boyfriend is with his best friend. She does this incase it's meaning is invalid and she truly has nothing to fear other than losing him due to her own paranoia.
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nicoarty  somewhere
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   Edgar, --- and Cecil Miller
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