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After "Lo Fatal"

After “lo fatal”

 

When I read you first I was living in Bergen.

Pretending at translation

and going up scree, clutching at conifers

in a painted flaxen sun.

 

I'd imagined you’d given up on being Modernista

to settle for a quaint shack—

for the hardness of the carved fjord.

 

Now if you were to arrive in the wild

where I have kept this place

strangely similar by the pine, blue herons,

Mount Ozzard over the dandelions,

 

how would you come walking down the road?

 

Would deer pause to smell your tracks

or the cedar cutter look up as he heard you pass,

or these coal-black snags

which guard the lot’s entrance

and haven't swayed in so long

groan?

 

Dichoso el árbol, que es apenas sensitivo.

Happy is the tree, you said. Scarcely sentient.

 

Ruben Dario: what is the tree

which rushes through this poem?

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May 30, 2015
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January 22, 2011

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