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Carnival Captive

We stand

staggered in a circle

gold-encrusted poles bolted

to the rotating floor beneath our tired

hooves.  Tomato sunburned children scramble

onto throbbing ashen backs, clutching at us with

sticky and and sugar-stained fingers.  The first strains

of music echo through our chiseled manes, eerie melodies

impossible to forget after the last children slides off the saddle.

 

We begin to move, slowly at first, then

           turning,                        

   spinning    

                           whirling,

                   wind

   rushing

across                  

our garish painted faces,

air smelling of syrupy sweat and roasted meat.

 

Jeering shouts of vendors and cackling shrieks of riders

penetrate our ringing ears with grating force.

Reds and yellows and blues bleed together,

spattering our spiraled vision with

dizzying palettes of primary hue.

Relentless ghost-like tunes,

around and around as

we rise and fall

rise and fall.

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rachel-ricca
Published
Aug 6, 2011
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