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Village in the mist

Driving up the highway

When I saw it in the mist

Like a pure and tender ******

Still waiting to be kissed

A village all forgotten

Somehow time had missed

You could see it from the highway

slightly hazy in the mist

 

Had time forgotten this poor place

Left in limbo for all days

Was it just a trick of light and sun

Manufactured through the haze

Were the folks here ****** to stay

Out of reach but in our gaze

Or were they truly here by choice

Living old, forgotten ways

 

Brigadoon did spring to mind

but, in truth I thought this good

Be something better than that curse

This village protected by the wood

I pulled on to the shoulder

And tried to see as best I could

This simple town or vision

That had not aged as it should

 

I saw no point of entry

No way to get there from my place

It was perfect, untouched, special

A village bathed in grace

Folks kept driving past me

Up the highway at such pace

They would never see this village

In the mist as fine as lace

 

The village may be magic

It may be something in between

In truth all I can tell you

What I saw, not what I mean

It's a village, plain and simple

in the woods, all shades of green

Un-kissed, and yet so perfect

stuck in stasis, in between

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Written by
roger-turner
Canadian
Published
Apr 14, 2015
Lines·Words
40·238
Tags
#time#lost#magic#limbo#between#mist#village#mythical#fortgotten#brigadoon
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