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Cars

by jolkin

Passing by One by one Stopping and starting Like my heart at your touch All this jerking around Has made me carsick And I feel uneasy Like when you gaze at me I need to get out I need fresh air But I'm still on the highway Breathing the same hyperventilation Don't talk for me too long Or I'll get sick again And I'll have to leave you once more Because I'm not used to this constant thumping sensation in my chest The cars keep passing by
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Thoughts from the highway in LA

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