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You and I

Wavy black ocean currents, a beautiful blue sun in the middle of a white sky, here, there is no time, my only thought is of you, on the beaches filled with glass, reflections of my blood spilled upon it, I am now one with this land, my heart and soul belong to the shore. On hills made of pearls one last tower remains, a golden tower upon a hill, with one little window all the way on top, there you sit, waiting, I see you watching and I hope you die, I want no part of you. My world begins to spin, with all eyes watching, I just want to drop dead.
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Written by
william-jaramillo
American
Published
Jul 5, 2011
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This is my first poem, constructive criticism would be appreciated, but don't be too brutal!

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