(alternate version, because I couldn't decide!)
I took my time.
Released my pride
Thought it was mine
Unleashing that tide

I drift idly by.
with eyes wide, why
It Echoes and Enfolds, empowers and devours.

Have I lost? Or have I won?
When I recollect, there's nothing I neglect.

I pray you remember this state of being, like an insect.