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The Hard Stuff, It Must Be Done Lovingly

by third-mate-third

It Must Be Done Lovingly - this  title comes easy, leaps from screen, jumps in between my eyes, where poems electric start, starting line tween the head and heart circuitry, followed by a thundering silence of say what... the notion, face smacks a five fingered lighting bolt, feeling the meaning, the thrust, but the body, the text, not, the explication, the purpose singular, not so much it's gonna make me work, this entitled commandment "it must be done lovingly," sure, words from heaven sent, what does it mean precisely it doesn't come with liner notes, just empty sleeves, no compact disc, to explain it well to your ill-written soul brain pulsating images, lyrics, tunes, mr. memories working overtime, but no catalogue, thematically a disaster, blue lined paper crawling with scrawlings, notes from a blues guitar, jumbled bojangling riffs discordant whipped, boy's locker room, towel whipped gonna give up, exactly what is the it that must be done so, with loving attention crap cutting, beat the bush, you know what's driving, snap, crackle and pop, it is arriving with mega doses of insatiable pain you don't love her anymore you knowing, that she needs the knowing, deserves the certitude of the bad news, but cowardly lion don't got no idea how to tell her so the words on the page resonate, with badass emotional clarity, a guiding light, do it lovingly makes no perfect sense, but it's sensible and almost perfect mr. memories speaks up at last, in a sad voice, the old times flash, drawing for you pictures, lending strength, and whatever else you gonna need, from history and tell her her lovingly, you don't love her anymore surrender your flag, hand over your weapons, you were good at loving her, some long time ago, but No don't say it with stale raisin bread reasons, soiled explanations, just hold her in a way, the way you used to that has grown dusty rusty from lack of use that will  explain everything, better, by doing it lovingly
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