i think poetry is most beautiful when it is written in pen. unedited. there is something about reading the words as they were written. to see where the tears kissed the page and how they distorted the writing as they fell. i like poems that were intended to be journal entries; pure naked emotions somehow blessed with a god-given aesthetic. sometimes an honest poem doesn't reflect its title, as if human emotion altered the original plan. that's real. that's poetry.