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brian mclaughlin
Poems
Feb 2015
The Unkind Back
My back
it hurts
the pain
it comes in spurts
The task
at hand
is to simply
try to stand
From hot packs
unto cold
I don't like this
getting old
It's become so hard to walk
I don't even want to talk
all I want is some relief
from this nagging pain and grief
It's even hard now just to think
seeing I've hurt my weakest link
and although I'm sharing ink
it's times like these that really stink
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