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Six purple tulips, Stand proud and tall, They are the lucky ones, Who survived despite it all, They are cared for and noticed, Treated with respect, They always get more water, Than the others can get, So no surprise then, With treatment like this, They bloom far more early, And can afford to take a risk, And is it really all that shocking, That out of all these flowers, The ones that are most beautiful, Are the ones doted on for hours. Five white tulips, And one more with a hunch, Sit lower in the vase, The feeblest of the bunch, They all knew from the start, That they would never live, As they were born in plainer robes, And have nothing more to give, One of their number, Has already succumbed, Looking down at the ground, Determination numbed, This flower was unlucky, Turned away by those above, When all it really needed, Was help and love.
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parsavagely-kompenere
19 / F
Published
Feb 6, 2015
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#love#metaphor#flowers#help#one#tulips#five#six#fairness#twelve
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