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3 lines poetry (collaboration)

dew drops glisten as the morning light dances in peaceful silence *in peaceful silence the great eastern sun rises greening the ridges* Greening the ridges Of the mountains and the vales Delightful—serene. Delightful— Serene Flowers Waltz Upon The Ground Feel The Rising Sun *Feeling the rising sun Beaming on angelic faces Leaving a heart dazed* Leaving a heart dazed In love with this tranquil scenery - A true beauty! *A true beauty Of love and colours, Brightening life forever.* Brightnening life forever, Like a dove engulfed in a clear sky, Yet a trick of our sore eyes. *Yet a trick of our sore eyes Cannot obscure the glistening Of whispered rain* of whispered rain which drenches our mother earth in a warm and loving embrace *In a warm and loving embrace, The winds prance apace While the rain sings its tranquil grace* while the rain sings it's tranquil grace my soul dances with joy and my heart joins in the song of the universe
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silas
M / American
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Written by
silas
M / American
Published
Jan 22, 2015
Lines·Words
47·164
Notes

To anyone who would like to add onto this, please leave your lines on comments and I will update it as

people add on.  This is an ongoing collaborative piece.

The format is 3 lines, and 1st line begins with the last line of previous 3 lines.  I discovered this way of collaborating on a different site and it's like playing telephone with poetry. You can add multiple times as long as you are not responding to yourself. It feels like a fun game with words.

1st stanza & 12th stanza written by me

2nd stanza written by John from Austin, TX

3rd stanza by Timothy: http://hellopoetry.com/timothy/

4th stanza by Marian: http://hellopoetry.com/marian/

5th stanza by Cat aka catbrd:

http://hellopoetry.com/cathy-s/

6th stanza by Blythe:

http://hellopoetry.com/blythe/

7th stanza &11th stanza by Mercury Chap:

http://hellopoetry.com/mercury-chap/

8th stanza by Snowy Writer:

http://hellopoetry.com/SnowyWriter/

9th stanza by Parsavagely Kompenere

http://hellopoetry.com/parsavagely-kompenere/

10th stanza by Pamela Rae:

http://hellopoetry.com/pamela-rae/

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