Dec 2014
'Tween too much and too
Little, there's a whole in the
Middle of doughnut...
Of the doughnut
{Revised, 1-16-15, to truer Haiku form}
Little, there's a whole in the
Middle of doughnut...
Of the doughnut
{Revised, 1-16-15, to truer Haiku form}
It's a Haiku, and then again it's not. Depending on whether you include the last line. The choice is yours, It can be too much if you say the last line, or it can be too little if you leave any other word out...and unlike most, it rhymes. It's hardly Haiku.
