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Dec 2014
'Tween too much and too
Little, there's a whole in the
Middle of doughnut...
Of the doughnut

{Revised, 1-16-15, to truer Haiku form}
It's a Haiku, and then again it's not. Depending on whether you include the last line. The choice is yours, It can be too much if you say the last line,Β Β or it can be too little if you leave any other word out...and unlike most, it rhymes. It's hardly Haiku.
David A Mastry
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David A Mastry  Orangevale, California
(Orangevale, California)   
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