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She couldn't have tried like she did and they couldn't have missed it so easily. A pretty simple task, but too many see too much and her eyes flicker with what she could know. She could feel like they wanted but who would she be, then? When found--they stared, for their creation had fell apart, not what they foresaw. Disconnected, for what she thought she was, or perhaps, who she actually became, had started to dissolve. Gazing at herself, the rise of what could be withers and with that her eyes cloud over once more, where she loses touch. Her only want being seen by others, but distracted by her own being.
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Mar 28, 2014
Mar 28, 2014 at 6:29 PM UTC
03/20/14 #2
She couldn't have tried like she did and they couldn't have missed it so easily. A pretty simple task, but too many see too much and her eyes flicker with what she could know. She could feel like they wanted but who would she be, then? When found--they stared, for their creation had fell apart, not what they foresaw. Disconnected, for what she thought she was, or perhaps, who she actually became, had started to dissolve. Gazing at herself, the rise of what could be withers and with that her eyes cloud over once more, where she loses touch. Her only want being seen by others, but distracted by her own being.
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Mar 28, 2014
Mar 28, 2014 at 6:29 PM UTC
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