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Trapped

by baylee

Much like being trapped in an elevator, Awaiting your rescue, Wondering if you should be the one to save yourself, But you start panicking once the doors wont open, You feel yourself shrinking, Drowning in your thoughts, Internally collapsing from the stress, You begin to hyperventilate, But not audibly, no, it's completely silent, The utter silence itself is deafening, You question the stability and structure Of the suspended room that your life is being held in, Back to the silence, was that a creaking sound Or are you just starting to become paranoid now, Is someone on the outside trying to pry the doors open To help rescue you, and get you out, Or is someone simply mindlessly hitting the elevator button Waiting for it to come, though it never will, Surely they'll become annoyed and just take the stairs, But how are you supposed to get out of this situation, This state of complete panic, you start to sob, And that's when you realize that this is what anxiety feels like.
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baylee
Published
Sep 10, 2015
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2m
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After a recent experience of getting trapped in an elevator, those minutes you're waiting to be saved seem like the longest moments of your life, specially for someone who already has an underlying fear of elevators. Not to mention the fact that you're someone who has serious anxiety problems, so this situation only makes you reflect outward and even further inward on yourself.

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#thoughts#stress#drowning#internal#panicking#collapsing#rescue#elevator#shrinking#saveyourself
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