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#elevator
I’ve begun recycling emotions so they’ll last longer and we can save the rat-bag planet. Sometimes I jump in elevators I did it this morning on the third floor this guy looked at me, askance. “Do you think you’re going to live forever?” I demanded. Sometimes I look at Peter and think that he’s the sexiest guy on earth I want to ravish him - and we’re at breakfast. Can a boyfriend be TOO perfect? “I could do better,” I tell him, out of the blue - because you’ve got to keep them on their toes. “Don’t beat yourself up,” he said, looking up from his buttery-croissant, sympathetically. “You’re doing your best,” he added. “Wait,” I said, “what are we talking about?” . . Songs for this: What's going on (the Detriot mix) by Marvin Gaye What's going on by Donny Hathaway What's going on by Paul Carrack
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Jan 12
Jan 12, 2026 at 1:41 PM UTC
Mondays
I cough a little, it sounds muffled, like a thump -- on a concrete wall.
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Mar 27, 2025
Mar 27, 2025 at 4:47 AM UTC
[ I cough a little ]
Just watch the children run Out of the lift (I've never Experienced it but since when was tuition fun?) One After another Parents searching amongst the crowd To find their own amongst the others And it's not like they're particularly loud But I still can't tell who's who And when they all make it to Mummy and Daddy Dashing past me As I stand plastered to the wall I'm just wondering how they're all So happy Now another group of adults now Probably off work Wondering how To pay the bills, feed the family These are the ones with the more Relatable faces Headspace Only for Work and stress And honestly this change is happening far Too early for the people in our Age and now the question I'm asking is “When will they grow out of this” This naivety, this knowing That growing Up won't change a thing Because that isn't what I've been seeing.
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Jan 15, 2025
Jan 15, 2025 at 8:21 AM UTC
Elevator Wallflower
Fifteen years going on sixteen, well recall many pinprick moments of our combinatory existentialism But an early moment reappeared, in a period of contemplation as I this morn, wove my way thru Manhattan city streets, during my diurnal walk of composition, a tradition Walt Whitman passed on to me, in Leaves of Grass, so over my Manhattan journey~obstacle course, now a three times weekly endeavor, of a two and one quarter miles duration, this came unto me Very early on, in our ro~dance we attended some cocktail/ business function, properly attired, a first for us, and thus a tad exciting, and in the elevation machine at the Waldorf Astoria Tower sky bounding, she stun gunned me with the simplest of positories… How shall you introduce me?. this nimble tounge, so rarely at a loss, gave an intuitive and simple answer: You are my girl friend, no pretense, I proffered and she thoughtfully replied, *While an absolute truth, perhaps since I am a Nana, over twice, and you, a Grandfather over thrice, perhaps something less juvenile is in order?* Mmm, perhaps you are right, then let me suggest boldly to name you as my lover, none other and let their mouths fall agape so full of their crackered canapés? She paused a moment on our ascent, replying, *Undoubtedly true and such a good lover are you, but the touch of ****** in many an impoverished mind, gives it a tangy hint of the unseemly tho, b u t if that’s your preference, lover will it be, but perhaps wordsmith, you keep on trying?* Ah I knew a rejection letter when I got one, so cruising higher, proffered a ‘my best friend?’ but her glance clearly indicated that suggestion, wholly unworthy of my skilled verbosity and more appropriate to a dodgy dog, if such I did possess The elevators of NYC, are sure and swift in elevating its population, and a growling desperado emotive was taking me hostage, I had what is now a “3S look,” an abbreviation for when I wear my Simply Stupefied Smile *Perhaps I may suggest that should the need arise for you to introduce me in a phrase accurate and simple, that might suffice?* Smilingly weakly, I, poet, awaited what surely was to be an obvious solution to my wordy and worldly failure, *Please introduce me as Your Biggest Fan and I shall, dear one, if asked, will offer you up as my Only Love Poet* And to this day, when introduction~making, I feel the sweet smile of an invisible and silent kick in my humbled and egotistical ****
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Mar 9, 2024
Mar 9, 2024 at 7:13 AM UTC
How shall I introduce you?
Fifteen years going on sixteen, well recall many pinprick moments of our combinatory existentialism But an early moment reappeared, in a period of contemplation as I this morn, wove my way thru Manhattan city streets, during my diurnal walk of composition, a tradition Walt Whitman passed on to me, in Leaves of Grass, so over my Manhattan journey~obstacle course, now a three times weekly endeavor, of a two and one quarter miles duration, this came unto me Very early on, in our ro~dance we attended some cocktail/ business function, properly attired, a first for us, and thus a tad exciting, and in the elevation machine at the Waldorf Astoria Tower sky bounding, she stun gunned me with the simplest of positories… How shall you introduce me?. this nimble tounge, so rarely at a loss, gave an intuitive and simple answer: You are my girl friend, no pretense, I proffered and she thoughtfully replied, *While an absolute truth, perhaps since I am a Nana, over twice, and you, a Grandfather over thrice, perhaps something less juvenile is in order?* Mmm, perhaps you are right, then let me suggest boldly to name you as my lover, none other and let their mouths fall agape so full of their crackered canapés? She paused a moment on our ascent, replying, *Undoubtedly true and such a good lover are you, but the touch of ****** in many an impoverished mind, gives it a tangy hint of the unseemly tho, b u t if that’s your preference, lover will it be, but perhaps wordsmith, you keep on trying?* Ah I knew a rejection letter when I got one, so cruising higher, proffered a ‘my best friend?’ but her glance clearly indicated that suggestion, wholly unworthy of my skilled verbosity and more appropriate to a dodgy dog, if such I did possess The elevators of NYC, are sure and swift in elevating its population, and a growling desperado emotive was taking me hostage, I had what is now a “3S look,” an abbreviation for when I wear my Simply Stupefied Smile *Perhaps I may suggest that should the need arise for you to introduce me in a phrase accurate and simple, that might suffice?* Smilingly weakly, I, poet, awaited what surely was to be an obvious solution to my wordy and worldly failure, *Please introduce me as Your Biggest Fan and I shall, dear one, if asked, will offer you up as my Only Love Poet* And to this day, when introduction~making, I feel the sweet smile of an invisible and silent kick in my humbled and egotistical ****
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Waiting on the elevator For my day of labor Instant gratification after Days of waiting safer Now we talk in secret Spaces craving the others Flavor of disgust leaving Rust in my joints and bones Masochistic I remember Pain has always been my Home.
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Nov 18, 2020
Nov 18, 2020 at 8:35 AM UTC
Elevator girl
I caught you smiling Through our kiss In the chaos of the elevator Wishing we were taking our clothes off To lay down next to each ones body And stare the stars upon us Dead lights but oh they shine so bright I wish you could see That you shine just the same Inside my heart. I'll go crazy for you if I have to And I say it again You don't have to do a blood pact with me I'm already attached to you Happy guy who still makes me shine along.
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Oct 23, 2019
Oct 23, 2019 at 8:24 PM UTC
My alive star
the sun will die but not for a long time not before our own infinities collapse into the absurdity and the unimportance of it all. the sun will die but not before goodwill closes its doors one last time. so long ****** $1 books and memories of old people couches that smelled like **** and beer and your great-grandfather's apartment. yeah, the sun will die but not before those kids who used to pick on you and that ******* on the train who got kicked in the ***** for making lewd comments in the quiet car become worm food for more decent creatures. the sun will ******* die so be glad. everything ends including all us ******** us heavy breathers and old ladies and ex-cons and alcoholics and plain humans. the sun will die but we got other things to worry about more relative than all the others so we may as well enjoy the wait.
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Sep 17, 2018
Sep 17, 2018 at 4:21 AM UTC
the unimportant death of a star
Floating        Low Enough To Press The Basement Floor.
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May 13, 2018
May 13, 2018 at 5:21 PM UTC
An Angel Walks into an Elevator
my writing class is above the pharmacy. an old elevator still rising when the doors open. nothing poetic happened to me today so why am i here
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Jan 30, 2018
Jan 30, 2018 at 12:51 AM UTC
bad apple
I'm stuck in an elevator Between floors I can't remember if it was going down, Up, Maybe sideways, I guess it doesn't matter anymore. I'm stuck in this lift, Alone, I've always been alone. Ten years ago I thought I was, You convinced me otherwise Now you're gone, Moving up, Or down, With somebody else. And I'm stuck, Between floors, With myself. You told me in the end I was terrible company, Now I know, It's true. I don't know that person Looking back at me In that mirror In a lift, That is stuck Between floors, Maybe 9 and 10, Both are my lucky numbers, Not anymore. I've been trapped in this cabin For hours Perhaps days, I'm not sure You took my watch.
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Oct 17, 2017
Oct 17, 2017 at 5:25 PM UTC
You took my watch
Just your regular Friday. Trapped in a poorly lit elevator with three other strangers. The only things they have in common are that they’re all wearing red shoes, and that they’re all going up. Everyone is listening to their own music - a weird mix of rap, rock, indie and folk that sounds great played in the same time. No one knows where they’ll get off the elevator, at what storey, nor if they’ll take a left or right afterwards. It’s all a mystery. The first couple of floors pass easily, maybe someone even cracks a joke or makes a funny comment and they all smile at their mirror reflection. Suddenly, the elevator clutches between floors and they get to see their faces for the first time. They are mesmerized. Although they have nothing in common besides the red shoes, They feel as if they are doppelgangers on the inside; They wake up in each-other’s heads and it all feels comfortable for a while, The chairs are cosy and the food is great! The mirrors disappear and they start to see the world from above. they realise that there’s no insurance, and that they’re suspended in mid-air, half way between the earth and the sky, a band of unknown, 4 complete strangers, everyone trying to act cool, posing for an imaginary sub-genre cover album photo, that no one will get to listen to. Minutes pass and they become hours, sky becomes sea and clouds vanish. They get tired of looking out the window and all the windows look tired of looking out of them. Someone finds a door and opens it. He looks at the others, waves, then jumps. They’ll never know if he drowned, got burned in the atmosphere or ended up on the good side of the freshly buttered toast. One of the remaining three starts taking selfies, Smiling at his virtual image, not being bothered at all that the image doesn’t smile back, being convinced that, in this way, he’s slowly becoming part of a special form of theatre, with a smiling/sad face construction, a bipolar bear with the heart of an eagle. The second one starts writing nervously on the walls; endless lines of pathetic reality; a combination of feelings, lies, email passwords, social media security questions and lots and lots of sophistry… everything intended to serve as a rock-solid personal legacy after the elevator’s presumed crash. The third one gets locked in his own head, carefully observing all of them, gazing in the blank, with his headphones still in his ears, but with no music on, no plan in his mind, no clean underwear, no purpose at the end of the journey, no solution, no answer for any of the police’s questions, trapped in an elevator like a great idea in somebody’s head, in a brain crack situation. He is all alone, humming sad chick tunes, slowly losing his wit and grit. The elevator walls reappear, and he is now going up again, by himself, slowly, surrounded by three pairs of red shoes that were made for walking, but are now floating around the universe, half-way between God and Darwin. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ypofGDdHpo
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Apr 28, 2017
Apr 28, 2017 at 6:43 AM UTC
#redshoes
Just your regular Friday. Trapped in a poorly lit elevator with three other strangers. The only things they have in common are that they’re all wearing red shoes, and that they’re all going up. Everyone is listening to their own music - a weird mix of rap, rock, indie and folk that sounds great played in the same time. No one knows where they’ll get off the elevator, at what storey, nor if they’ll take a left or right afterwards. It’s all a mystery. The first couple of floors pass easily, maybe someone even cracks a joke or makes a funny comment and they all smile at their mirror reflection. Suddenly, the elevator clutches between floors and they get to see their faces for the first time. They are mesmerized. Although they have nothing in common besides the red shoes, They feel as if they are doppelgangers on the inside; They wake up in each-other’s heads and it all feels comfortable for a while, The chairs are cosy and the food is great! The mirrors disappear and they start to see the world from above. they realise that there’s no insurance, and that they’re suspended in mid-air, half way between the earth and the sky, a band of unknown, 4 complete strangers, everyone trying to act cool, posing for an imaginary sub-genre cover album photo, that no one will get to listen to. Minutes pass and they become hours, sky becomes sea and clouds vanish. They get tired of looking out the window and all the windows look tired of looking out of them. Someone finds a door and opens it. He looks at the others, waves, then jumps. They’ll never know if he drowned, got burned in the atmosphere or ended up on the good side of the freshly buttered toast. One of the remaining three starts taking selfies, Smiling at his virtual image, not being bothered at all that the image doesn’t smile back, being convinced that, in this way, he’s slowly becoming part of a special form of theatre, with a smiling/sad face construction, a bipolar bear with the heart of an eagle. The second one starts writing nervously on the walls; endless lines of pathetic reality; a combination of feelings, lies, email passwords, social media security questions and lots and lots of sophistry… everything intended to serve as a rock-solid personal legacy after the elevator’s presumed crash. The third one gets locked in his own head, carefully observing all of them, gazing in the blank, with his headphones still in his ears, but with no music on, no plan in his mind, no clean underwear, no purpose at the end of the journey, no solution, no answer for any of the police’s questions, trapped in an elevator like a great idea in somebody’s head, in a brain crack situation. He is all alone, humming sad chick tunes, slowly losing his wit and grit. The elevator walls reappear, and he is now going up again, by himself, slowly, surrounded by three pairs of red shoes that were made for walking, but are now floating around the universe, half-way between God and Darwin. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ypofGDdHpo
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in and out doors, i go when the shadows show, i turn stuck in an elevator, that keeps going up let me out, bring it to a complete stop the light seems to follow me as i seek to find peace crawling through the snow rain falls upon my skin here i go, here i will sleep
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Dec 23, 2016
Dec 23, 2016 at 2:12 AM UTC
daydreaming
Last night I had a hard time. I was thinking of you before I fell asleep. And while I was sleeping, I was dreaming of you. And in my dream, We were together. I held your hand, You called me "Babe." It was amazing. It was a dream come true. But then in my dream, You got on an elevator. So I followed you in, And turned around. And you pressed the bottom floor button, And quickly ran out. I was trapped in the elevator, Plummeting to the bottom. Just like I feared would happen
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May 4, 2016
May 4, 2016 at 6:26 PM UTC
Streams, Teams, Lima Beans, and Bottomless Dreams
I waited for an elevator It was an exceptionally long pause, And there was a group of three arguing Over the meaning of a clause. I knew the answer to their query, But questioned if I should reply. Social stigmas can be strange So I decided to be shy. They searched their minds, They racked their brains, And I just stood there - The answer boiling on my tongue. My elevator arrived just then, And I reluctantly stepped inside. The doors closed slowly, slowly, And I heard their voices die... ...So it is with my faith. Many people are searching And I have the answer, But I am too afraid to speak. So I step inside an elevator, And lift myself above their problems Pridefully rejecting the searching Of those who need an answer.
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Feb 23, 2016
Feb 23, 2016 at 8:36 PM UTC
I Stepped Into an Elevator
Much like being trapped in an elevator, Awaiting your rescue, Wondering if you should be the one to save yourself, But you start panicking once the doors wont open, You feel yourself shrinking, Drowning in your thoughts, Internally collapsing from the stress, You begin to hyperventilate, But not audibly, no, it's completely silent, The utter silence itself is deafening, You question the stability and structure Of the suspended room that your life is being held in, Back to the silence, was that a creaking sound Or are you just starting to become paranoid now, Is someone on the outside trying to pry the doors open To help rescue you, and get you out, Or is someone simply mindlessly hitting the elevator button Waiting for it to come, though it never will, Surely they'll become annoyed and just take the stairs, But how are you supposed to get out of this situation, This state of complete panic, you start to sob, And that's when you realize that this is what anxiety feels like.
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Sep 10, 2015
Sep 10, 2015 at 11:28 AM UTC
Trapped
I walk across the landing and through the double doors and aim towards the lift shaft, that's where I'm going, of course. It's as if it hears my footsteps and needs no company as that old elevator shoots down to level 3. Every single morning as I approach its doors it disappears pretty quick down to those lower floors. I swear it sees me coming and doesn't like the look so as I rush to hitch a ride the **** thing slings its hook. The doors are on a system, computerised I read. But whenever I get near them they change the ****** speed. I stand alone here waiting and it just isn't fair 'cause I am stuck up here when I want to be down there. It speeds down to the bottom and sits on the ground floor you can here it taunting you with the movements of the door. Then after what seems ages it gradually starts to rise giving me some hope at last as I can hear the noise. Then it makes a pit stop at another floor and seems to take forever to open and close its door. Each and every level seems to get a viewing as if it wants to **** some time, with my mind it is ******** And then it reaches the sixth floor as if it is my saviour and finally opens up the doors as if it's doing a favour. It seems as if this machine requires me to stalk so now I've found the stairwell and instead I'm going to walk.
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Jul 9, 2015
Jul 9, 2015 at 1:50 PM UTC
****** Elevator
Claustrophobia confines me Noise is muted Time slows down The sound of my racing heart fills the air The world turns like a haunted merry-go-round And my sight blurs I gulp in stale air The smell of mass body odour stings my nose My palms are sweating Fellow humans beside me turn into snarling aliens My body shrieks at me to run But the ground grabs my feet with clawed fingers Panic is overwhelming common sense I am losing my mind A scream slowly rises to my throat DING The doors open One sigh of relief And my body gratefully flies out into freedom Never again
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Jun 8, 2015
Jun 8, 2015 at 4:37 AM UTC
Claustrophobia
: LAST NIGHT— I watched a ***** internet video; a man getting halved by an Elevator. It was a slow process.      — LISTEN: I am not really sure if I want to think about it at the moment— and I certainly don't want to write it out. That would require me a stretch of contemplation                                —AND a reach to be descriptive on my part, or at least not to be redundant. No, In order to tell you about it, I would really need to Stress the details that got me: That really human kind of **** you know?           LIKE: the expressions on his face, and how closely his step brought him to near freedom—just outside that metal box. Just before it came down hard, and took 50% of the **poor ******* with it. It was the manner in which he got stuck that pushed me There, and not traditionally. Think long-ways. The exact scenario from my nightmare so far back— with a single deviation. Setting. Of course, inside my twisted anti-fantasy: it was the antagonist was suffering,  also this character I had come to know by name and action.    ...Anyway that segment shocked me. And I don't get shocked that often. It was a sort of fate that I never actually thought I would observe in person. There is always the stopping point when watching gore online and that was mine.
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Apr 24, 2015
Apr 24, 2015 at 2:17 AM UTC
**REDDIT.COM/WATCHPEOPLEDIE**
The lift is a truly marvellous creation It moves people via elevation.
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Jan 24, 2015
Jan 24, 2015 at 12:47 AM UTC
The lift (elevator)