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a crunch a wet thud & then the slap of skin against pavement broken cartilage fractured bones a valley opens a dam bursts thick black blood pools on the cement
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mayhem-is-a-virtue
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Feb 4, 2015
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7·30
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#fight#blood#sensual#fighting#thriller#vivid#sensory#pavement#cement#onomatopoeia
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